Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some people share a perspective that
school
children should not be given homework
by their teachers, while others argue that homework
plays an important role in the education of children. In my opinion, I strongly believe that a little bit of homework
which would not take their entire time
is fine as kids require time
for playing and other activities along with studies. The essay below delves into both views, first
explaining why some people feel homework
should not be given then
discussing why others feel the necessity for it. The essay further
explains my point of view and ends, summarising all points in the conclusion.
To begin
with, some folks believe that kids should not be given homework
as they need time
for other activities as well. To illustrate, youngsters spend almost half of their day at school
studying so the rest of the time
they have at home
should be for playing and exploring other interests like learning music, painting, basketball, football and so on. Studying all day does not enhance a child's intelligence level, participating in extracaricular
activities does. Correct your spelling
extracurricular
extra-curricular
Besides
, sitting and reading all day promotes obesity in kids as they do not get the required time
to go outside and play. A recent
research in the US suggests that a large proportion of Remove the article
Recent
school going
youngsters suffer from obesity and low intelligence level because their entire days are occupied with reading academic books. Add a hyphen
school-going
Thus
, adolescents should not be burdened with homework
as play
Correct your spelling
playtime
time
and learning other fun things
is also
important.
On the contrary
, there are folks who think homework
plays an important role in the education of adolescents. And this
is because homework
allows them to get a better understanding of certain hard topics. For instance
, it oftens
happens that young Correct your spelling
often
onesdo
Correct your spelling
ones do
ones
not
construe certain Change the verb form
does not
did not
things
taught in class and homework
enables them to clearly understand those things
. It enlightens them with more knowledge and help
secure higher grades in exams. Change the verb form
helps
Hence
, homework
is needed as it helps them to get a better understanding of topics, enhance and broaden their horizons and increase their grades.
As mentioned earlier in the essay, I feel little bit homework
helps continue the flow of studies at Change preposition
of homework
home
but teachers should make sure that it does not take up the time
that these minors require for playing and learning creative things
as that is
important as well.
To conclude, it is important for school
work to be confined within its premises as minors must have time
to learn other creative pursuits but continuation
of academic studies at Add an article
a continuation
the continuation
home
allows them to construe topics better. That's why I believe moderate
amount of Correct article usage
a moderate
school work
at Correct your spelling
schoolwork
home
is fine as it would spare them hours to indulge in other interests.Submitted by maimunazaman474 on
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