Some people think that it is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme. Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available. Discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate.

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The question of whether to save or spend

money

is very topical today, as so many

people

are struggling with financial worries. There are valid arguments on both sides which

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will discuss now. On the

one

hand, it is often said that spending

money

one

way to relax and enjoy life.

For instance

by shopping or taking holidays, and there is certainly some truth in

this

In addition

, we usually have no choice but to spend quite a large proportion of our available salary on

day

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a day

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to day expenses

such

as food, housing and transport, and so there is surprisingly little remaining to save anyway.

Finally

spending

money

on products and services boosts the economy and creates employment and in

this

sense is a worthwhile action.

On the other hand

, other

people

point out the dangers of reckless spending,

for example

on frivolous or unnecessary items which is often encouraged by advertising. Young

people

in particular

are vulnerable to being influenced like

this

Furthermore

, advocates of saving often point out that without a reserve of funds for emergencies, unemployment or illness,

people

are putting themselves at risk of hardship or even bankruptcy.

This

is especially true in the current economic situation.

Lastly

, on

this

side of the debate,

people

emphasize the need to accumulate wealth during

one

's lifetime, so that

one

's children can inherit

money

or property, which will increase their security and standard of living. In my opinion, I tend to agree that it is wiser to save

money

wherever possible, for reasons which benefit both individuals today and future generations.

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Some people think that it is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme. Other people feel that money should be spent whenever it is available. Discuss these views and reach an opinion on this debate.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that children should study world literature at school, while others believe that they should study their national literature. What is your opinion?

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

1. Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Graduates who cannot find work in their chosen field should be advised to do a second degree, rather than taking a job that does not interest them.