Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the globalization era, technology is considered
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part of human life. One of the
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is the use of the internet in
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schools and
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workplaces
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so that people could take their classes and job to their
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. The beauty of school and work from home is that it gives us more flexibility in doing
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tasks.
First
of all, it will bring less preparation time to do those activities.
For instance
, in my own experience, it took more than two hours of
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time from my residence to the office and another two to get back. But now, since I can do the job in my own room, I could save those seconds and use them for
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,
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Secondly
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activities anywhere we want. We can have it in some holiday places where the
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could give us more spirit and energy to get the jobs done better and faster.
Thus
, it will
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our own room is that it very much
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on the facilities that we have. No one can argue that not every
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has
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internet connection.
Therefore
, the slow connection will get in the way of our task and give us disadvantages. In summary, bringing school and work
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home will give us more
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than negative effects.
Nonetheless
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