In recent times many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negative effects on society?

There are many people nowadays living while young,old all ages choose to live alone. In the joint family positive or negative
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on society.
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both advantages and disadvantages society With regards to
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positive effect .
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mostly the individual
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alone our life enjoy the lifestyle according to choices.
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good business
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money not the pressure for
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member .
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the starting new family in
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the large negative effect living alone, recently days using mobile phone social media it is not attractive the family member. Human beings are not supported
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of talk .
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the mental health problems To conclude,
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cities and
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society are changing in digital life most
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living alone,
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lack of benefits and more negative impacts
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