You have seen an advertisement for an evening course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter, – ask for details of the course – ask if the course teachers are qualified native speakers – request that the institution sends you their brochure You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir,

Last

week, I came across an advertisement in the local newspaper regarding an evening course to study a foreign language. I am writing

this

letter to express my interest in the same, as well as want to obtain few details regarding that.

Firstly

, I am keen to learn French;

thus

, wants to understand the price of the entire course.

Besides

that, it will be great if I get a detailed understanding of the entire structure: — like how (online or classroom) & when the classes are conducted, the various mediums that are used in teaching.

Furthermore

, the various ways that are used in order to focus on the speaking part, as

that is

crucial for any language.

In addition

to that, I

also

want to obtain information on whether the teachers are native speakers or not.

Also

, if they are certified by the European language council to conduct classes. Could I please get a brochure with all the relevant details in my communication address

that is

mentioned as the sender address on the envelope? I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

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