Write about the following topic: Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

The debate has been going around that experimenting

scientific

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theories and findings on

animals

are

un-ethical

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unethical

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and laws should be pass in order to make it illegal.

However

,

on the other

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many people argued that scientific discoveries can only be found while experimenting on

animals

. As our world advance in science and technology scientists are testing out many

hypothesis

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. While testing these theories test subjects are needed in some cases living

organism

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are required to carry out the procedure. While we are carrying out

these alternative hypothesis

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this alternative hypothesis

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on these

animals

we must

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bear

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bare

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in our mind that we are doing these for the greater good. In all the research

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many protocols are being placed in order to stop

animals

abuse from happening.

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instance

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animals

should be

well fed

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, the environment must be clean, painkillers and nerve blocking agents should be

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administered

administer

during and after the procedures

has

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been done.

Also

, the committee of biomedical science has issued a body of law that the hypothesis must important enough to use

animals

as

a

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test subjects

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, huge sums of

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money

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moneys

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have been granted to researchers to find ways of not using

animals

as a sacrifice. With that many labs has been using

this

alternative way like

instead

of using the whole animal as a specimen the

desire

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part of the animal has been grown in the lab with the technique known as tissue culture. With

this

new

technique

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the animal

do

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not have to endure the pain.

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also

benefits

for

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the scientists

as-well

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because the outcome can be easily accessed without harming the animal as well as the cost of taking care

the

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organism is reduced drastically. The

last

testing specimens that we are using right now is microorganism with similar metabolism or features as scientists desire. To sum

up

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harming any life form cannot be justified but alternative ways, laws and protocols should be in place to set

a

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certain

boundries

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boundaries

to keep the process as humanely as possible.