some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Organisation
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is always considered as
one
of the disciplined
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. Many people view
this
particular word as an important factor that helps in attaining success.
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,
public
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the public
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opines that it is essential to maintain
one
's residing place and work environment clean and tidy. I completely support
this
point of view and would give my justification in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,
Organised
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an Organised
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person
shows the decorum that he
/
she follows in their daily
life
. They are disciplined and always attains their goals in
life
,
for instance
; People serving in the army
/
navy
/
military
they
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have
this
aura in them and their lifestyle is a great example of
this
.
Secondly
, Tracking is always possible, when
things
are sorted out. While working in a busy schedule, smart people do make sure to keep track of
things
, which
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in turn
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inturn
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in turn
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shows their organisational skills.
For example
, record keeping or to-do list, which reduces the chances of missing out
anything
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on anything
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.
Thirdly
, It enables
time saving
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.
Things
kept at a proper place always inject time to do more productive
things
.
This
particular aspect
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into use
,
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when
one
is running out of time to do some stuff. Fourthly, It shows the character of the individual.
Cluttered
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A cluttered
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workspace never gives a good impression about a
person
as compared to
a
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exquistively
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exquisitely
oraganised
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organised
workspace.
This
would showcase the world of how a
person
thinks or is actually in his
/
her real
life
.
For instance
, we always feel happy and welcomed in
a clean surroundings
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clean surroundings
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as compared to crowded and misarranged
place
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places
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. To conclude,
this
skill is something which can be gained from
practise
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practice
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and with adopting
this
a
person
can actually
acheive
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achieve
goals in their
life
. Being organised does not only helps in attaining the target but
also
portrays
one
's
demeanor
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demeanour
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.
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