We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits

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computers
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in the future? Is
this
dependence on
computers
a nice thing or should we be more suspicious of their
adventage
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advantage
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In
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day and, most people tend to view things differently, even whether We are becoming rise dependent on
computers
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are spend
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in business, hospitals, crime detection and even
to fly
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planes. What things will they
be spend
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in the future? Is
this
dependence on
computers
a nice thing or should we be more suspicious of their
adventage
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advantage
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