As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that car users should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world ,acceleration in breakthrough technology and elevated earning capacity made it easy to own a
car
.
However
,
this
need
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to have a robust
road
system
in order to cope up with
increase
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number of cars which comes with huge
investement
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investment
. Now, authorities will have to make a decision to either cascade the
cost
to the
car
owners
or
they
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give it as a part of
road
infrastructure. In
this
essay , we will cover both the opinion including my opinion.
First
and foremost, having a
car
is a luxury and certainly not a need. Recent research shows that every year there is
significant
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number of
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increase in
the
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car
sales globally. Every country must have a robust
road
system
to cater to the need of current demand
of
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car
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cars
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by keep upgrading infrastructure and
cost
should be transferred to the
car
owners
.
For example
in Singapore, buying a
car
is
exhorbidantly
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exorbitantly
high.
This
is a
concious
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conscious
decision by the authorities to discourage people to buy more
car
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cars
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.
Nonetheless
, those who can afford they have to pay huge
road
tax and
car
owner
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owners
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can enjoy driving
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a car
the car
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car
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cars
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in
singapore
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Singapore
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with
extraordinary
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an extraordinary
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road
system
. Not every country is well equipped with
great
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road
system
and
hence
it would not be feasible for the
car
owners
to bear the
cost
if they cannot enjoy the benefit of it.
For example
, In
india
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road
systems are not very well planned and increasing
road
tax would hurt people sentiments if
car
owners
are asked to pay. In
such
scenarios,
authroties
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authorities
should cover the
cost
until they have a plan to enhance
road
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system
.
However
, for luxurious
cars
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,cars
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there may charge a
road
tax as
such
car
owners
would be able to afford it.
This
may help
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government
goverment
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to balance the
cost
. In my opinion , Transport Authorities should cover the
cost
of
road
system
by attributing largely in implementing new
intiatives
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initiatives
for
road
infrastructure which may encourage
car
owners
to participate willingly in covering
cost
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the cost
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.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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