The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
In the presented diagram, the
cement
-making procedure is illustrated and can be accomplished in 5 steps, along with
how it can be used to produce concrete for building purposes. The first step of this
manufacturing process involves grinding raw materials, while
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The initial stage of the process begins when limestone and clay are ground into a powder form via two-cylinder crushers. The powder of two different materials is then
blended in the mixture before sending it through the rotating heater. After
this
, it is being
ground again by the grinder to be more powder-like. Once everything has been completed, the Unnecessary verb
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last
step is to pack cement
into the bags.
In addition
, cement
is needed in order to produce concrete which is used in the building industry. In order to get concrete production, 15% of
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cement
is required along with
10% of
10% of clear water, 25% of sand, and 50% of gravel. Correct your spelling
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is followed by feeding everything together in the concrete mixer and getting the concrete ready for construction purposes.Submitted by mintjinjutha on
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