Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem such measures cause?

According to the World Farmer’ Organization (WFO) , an area of around 1,8
acre
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is needed to run 1 cow,
therefore
an average
20
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acres
land
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can only
be use
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to run 11 cows.
This
is minute comparing to the 8,920 pounds of rice per harvested acre.
This
is one of the many reasons why people are convinced that
meat
production requires more land than crop productions, which had caused a worry in land loss and reform for reduced
meat
consumption
. The world’s market relies on 1 simple principle, supply and demand. In order to have a natural reduction of
meat
consumption
, the demand must decline unforcefully. There are many ways to achieve
this
such
as
meat
reduction
campaign
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, TV ads propaganda, scientific research which proves the harm of
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land loss
landless
. One very popular way to persuade people to reduce
meat
consumption
are
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turning to
vegaterian
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vegetarian
or vegan, which comes from the hope to stop animal cruelty.
However
, as we have seen throughout history, humans are hesitant to change a custom which they
have
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abide
to
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for a long time; in
this
case, since humans walked the planet. Because of
this
, more extreme
measure
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measures
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are needed to reduce
meat
consumption
. Legislators and reformers must come together to aid
this
issue, laws are the most effective way to address a problem
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scale. But, using laws always come with a risk of damaging freedom. Even rights. The
goverment
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government
holds no authority over what
citizen
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citizens
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eat and drink,
therefore
legislation affecting these rights might result in rejection, protests, even strikes. In conclusion, more scientific studies and research must be conducted to
further
emphasize the magnitude of
landloss
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land loss
landless
due to
meat
production as science is the only true meaning to persuade people in
this
modern age.
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