in the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. what do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in small community?
In recent years living in urban
cities
have become a trend. In old times people
used to live in small communities where they know everyone around them but in today's ,time people
know very few people
in large cities
. Living in a small area have its both advantages and disadvantages as well and I will discuss both views in this
essay.
To begin
with, the foremost upside of living in a small community is as everyone knows others they have the
better communication skills. Due to that Correct article usage
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people
know the situation of everyone better and they were able to help people
in case of emergency. For example
, in case of someone has a medical emergency on one call many people
can gather around and help the person in need. Not only that but because of this
people
have less responsibility as they can look after each other. As they live within the short-range
they don't have to travel too much in case of need as it can save time for them.
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However
, on the other side, due to less
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the less
population
there are fewer opportunities for Add a comma
,population
people
living there. For example
, if someone wants to pursue a career in marketing as it is impossible to achieve big goals in small villages and for that
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,that
Furthermore
in large, cities
they know fewer Add a comma
,cities
people
that does not mean it is a bad thing. In fact, as they know few people
they do not have to worry about other people
's emotions. And in ,emergency
they can always take the help of technology to solve their problem as now technology has replaced humans in all aspects.
To sum up, I reiterate my opinion that living in a big city outweighs its advantages on its disadvantages. But with some Correct article usage
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initiatives
we can make even big Add a comma
,initiatives
cities
more considerate with each other and we can expand our communication.Submitted by pakshit910 on
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