Some people say that in our current moden age, it is unnecessary to teach hand writing skills to children what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's
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modern
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everything is digital from writing a letter to calculating complex
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algorithms
. There is a school of thought
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that in recent times it is useless to teach
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penmanship to children. I
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with
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thought and I will give my reason for that in
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essay.
To begin
with, before some century ago there was not even invention of the paper and a pen. But with that invention
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world
's communication is changed.
For instance
, writing letters to note down important notes on
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piece of paper. Sure in today's developing
world
how to use a computer or any kind of device is necessary, but it is not
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excuse for
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excluding
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traditional ways for recording information.
Secondly
, in process of storing
this
information on machines and
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you need all the
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which don't come at cheap price, and not only that but you have to gain a basic
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knowledge
to how to use
this
automation.
Last
but not least
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type of technology is not available in all
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of the
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yet do it is impossible to get
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hooked up on technology. To sum up, I reiterate my opinion that knowing how to use
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development
is as
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useful
as knowing
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.
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