Some people say that in our current moden age, it is unnecessary to teach hand writing skills to children what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today's

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modern

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everything is digital from writing a letter to calculating complex

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algorithms

. There is a school of thought

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that in recent times it is useless to teach

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penmanship to children. I

am completely disagree

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with

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thought and I will give my reason for that in

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essay.

To begin

with, before some century ago there was not even invention of the paper and a pen. But with that invention

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world

's communication is changed.

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, writing letters to note down important notes on

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piece of paper. Sure in today's developing

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how to use a computer or any kind of device is necessary, but it is not

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excuse for

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excluding

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traditional ways for recording information.

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, in process of storing

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information on machines and

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you need all the

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which don't come at cheap price, and not only that but you have to gain a basic

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knowledge

to how to use

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automation.

Last

but not least

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type of technology is not available in all

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of the

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yet do it is impossible to get

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hooked up on technology. To sum up, I reiterate my opinion that knowing how to use

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development

is as

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useful

as knowing

a good writing skills

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