You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing regarding a petition you have filed about the
noice
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noise
from my flat,
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am apologies for the behaviour and
inconvience
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inconvenience
occured
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occurred
. I will explain the reason of cause and the action to prevent it. As you have noticed,
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moved in recently
in
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this
old rented flat.
This
flat is not managed in
proper
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way due to which old furniture needs to
be replace
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. I live alone and because of
which
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i
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have to cut these
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furniture
and moved out to the store. I used to go to
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and come late because of
work load
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, due to which
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have to do all
home work
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late
night
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everyday
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. Please bear with me and close your windows for a time being. I hope
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will finish
this
all by
coming
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weekend and you will not listen
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noice
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noise
voice
again. I am deeply sorry for the unfortunate situation. Kind Regards, Rahul
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