Your child is going on a three-day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: • Say why you would like to go on the trip • Suggest what you could do to help during the trip • Ask questions about the trip

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am interested in be part of the group who will accompany our children during the foreign school travel.

In addition

, I would appreciate it if you answer my questions about your planning for

this

period. With regards to my previous experiences, I would like to say that I have been working as a tour guide for ten

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I have a large experience with

this

job. On top of that, I speak French and Spanish currently,

thus

that will help us to achieve an amazing stay in Paris. During these three days, I will be able to cooperate with you, monitoring activities and schedules. In

this

way, we will enjoy a pleasant journey. On top of that, I would suggest a memorable

last

night for us, when we could arrange an outside dinner to share with others the memorable days experienced by our group.

Finally

, I am concerned about the type of entertainment offered and the essential documentation. Please, let me know if you planned activities for each age group and send me an email specifying all papers indispensable. I would be grateful if you could accept my suggestions and answer my questions. Yours faithfully, Anne Smith.

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