You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news

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Dear Sam, I am writing to let you that I have changed my job and joined the new one on 1st August 2021. The main reason behind the job change is that the projects in my previous company were not related to new technologies and there was no scope for career growth.

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, they were working on outdated software and the work was monotonous. I joined Accenture, my current profile is Senior Software and the work location is Bangalore. The company working on artificial intelligence technology and all the projects are at an international level that needs proper planning and strategies to deliver them within time. I have some more piece of news for you that I am coming to the U.K for the training session from 5th August to 18th August. My project training is going on in the U.K. so, I am here for 12days. We can meet on weekend or after office hours, whatever sounds good for you. I look forward to hearing from you, Best Wishes, Sonam

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You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you changed jobs Describe your new job Tell him/her your other news

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some students take one year off between school and university. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Influence of human beings on the worlds ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. Causes and solutions

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the percentage of overweight children in western societies has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?