Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem such measures cause?

As
time
flies,
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meat
production
“consume” more land than
agricultural
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industry. As a consequence of the fact that land is becoming more scarce, the global consumption
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this
nutritious source of food should be reduced. To resolve
this
, we have to propose some feasible solutions and foresee a number of upcoming problems which are closely
realated
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related
. From my point of view,
firstly
, to curtail man’s demand of consuming
large
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amount of meat, we have to have a gradual
rise
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raise
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the
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price of
this
production
,
instead
of a rapid one. The reason why I propose
this
idea is that people need to have enough
time
to adapt and change the way they prepare daily meals. During
this
time
, a brand-new nutritious source of food should be ready to replace meat
production
. Once
this
step is done, it is our responsibility to raise people’s awareness about
this
and lower its price at the
first
stage for a period of
time
.
This
will turn out to be an absolute hardship for everyone and we need to be patient and
also
creative in the way we introduce
this
production
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to everyone.
However
, it is somehow undeniable that
this
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is
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quite chancy when a large number of people cannot adapt to
this
or
unfortunately
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allergic to
this
type of food,
therefore
, it is necessary to have a
back-up
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plan for
this
situation. In
additional
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, if we do not take
this
seriously by not following procedures and some principle rules, there is a great likelihood that our daily meals are no longer balanced and calorie-controlled anymore.
Consequently
,
this
could directly
leads
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to meals deficient in vitamins, fibres, proteins.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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