Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

Dear John, I'm writing to request you to count me in the group for a three-day school
trip
to Sweden you are organizing. Recently, when I found that you are looking after parents to accompany their children on
this
trip
, it gave me relief from my worry about my son. As you are aware, due to his rare medical condition, doctors have advised us to take extra care of him.
Therefore
, I and my wife constantly worry about him. Considering the treatment he is going on, it is vital for us to regularly monitor his health and stick to the necessary precautions every day.
Moreover
, I've travelled to Sweden in past, and I can guide you well in planning
this
trip
.
Likewise
, I can help you with the European visa process for a group of students.
However
, Sweden offers a plethora of accommodation options, but I can suggest the best places to stay within budget.
Additionally
, I want to know the day you've planned
to begin
the
trip
. Can you
also
share what age group of pupils will be going?
Also
, did you already shortlisted the visiting places? Let us together make these three days remarkable for the students. I'll be grateful to hear from you. Kind regards, Dave
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