Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kinds of problem such measures cause?

In the world, not only crop production that make land problem
,
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meat
production is
also
the reason why land resources are being destroyed. Every day, every
months
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, humans eat
a tons
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a ton
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of
meat
, many
animal
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animals
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had been killed to meet the requirement of us. And go with it is the place where produce
meat
for human, it
take
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many lands, many
forest
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forests
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was cut off to become a factory, a company of produce
meat
.
This
action is not good for
environment
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the environment
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, so we need a solution to pretend it. I think the government must realize the danger of
this
problem, from that most of the citizen must to know and all of us will find out the solutions. We can reduce the
meat
we eat
everyday
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,
instead
of
that is
vegetable
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, tofu, bread or noodles. Encourage children when they were young, eat less
meat
and eat more seafood, green vegetables. Or now
human
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humans
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can make
meat
in
laboratory
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, it
reduce
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the death of
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the animal
an animal
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animal
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animals
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and its taste sounds amazing, nothing different from real
meat
. If
this
measure
become
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more popular, so we can reduce
place
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the place
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to produce
meat
. Only one place can make many
meats
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types of meat
slices of meat
lumps of meat
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that be able to respond
requirement
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of people. Overall, as we can see, everything that we do
everyday
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, we think that fine, it will have no problem to all the world, but no, a little thing simple like what we eat can
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effect
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and cause many
issue
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issues
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. So, let’s do from little to
large
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thing, each action is very meaningful to where we live.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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