Some people think that paper money and coins will be replaced completely by credit cards and online method of payments in the near future. Do you agree or disagree with their statement?

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People have been using

money

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for buying something or trade for many years. Some individuals support that

credit-cars

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credit cars

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and online shopping are useful than paper money and coins while others think that it is wrong. I strongly agree

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that

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the

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first

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statement by the agency of more practical and spending less time. The

first

reason is that

networked

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method of payments is more practical than

bill

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a bill

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of exchange.

For instance

, when a teenager wants to hang out with her friends, she needs money but she does not wish to use

cashes

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cash

amounts of cash

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as they are in her bag or her wallet takes up space. Whereas, she can replace them with something various.

Therefore

, most people prefer credit-cards because it takes up less space and it is

also

easy to use. The

second

cause is that spend less time.

Most

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population

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populations

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are doing online shopping because of

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a pandemic

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pandemic

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. When

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the corona

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corona virus

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coronavirus

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started in the world, most citizens start to use

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the website

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website

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websites

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for shopping. Some days, there was a curfew in

the

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apply

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most country and

that is

why they could not go

shopping

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to shopping

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mall

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malls

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. Yet, when the bans ended, people continued to shop online because they were getting less time and could see more clothes

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less date

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. To sum,

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everything that has been stated so far, the world has been changing for lots of years. Some jobs are easily now.

Consequently

, the future is going to be of the online transaction and carrying the physical currencies will not be preferred.

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Some people think that paper money and coins will be replaced completely by credit cards and online method of payments in the near future. Do you agree or disagree with their statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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