‘Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough’ To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is a nice saying "
Failure
 is a key towards success". It is always not necessary that person
 gets  success in one go, sometimes it requires multiple Correct article usage
a person
efforts
 and nothing wrong in that, but your efforts
 should be in the right direction. So, it does not justify that Failure
 is proof that the desire
 or determination was not strong enough. Furthermore
, I would like to provide my views on the same.
To begin
 with there are multiple associated aspects with any endeavours, which affect the final result directly or indirectly. In addition
, there could be several factors such
 as internal or external. Few of them might be easier to control, whereas rest
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the rest
out
 of the control. Along with Add a missing verb
are out
that
 there could be multiple challenges, in all these foremost important things, your Add a comma
,that
efforts
 should be in an appropriate way with required all the facilities and support as without that it will be difficult to approach a
 right track. In accordance with Correct article usage
the
this
, we can say if efforts
 are applied rightly with all preventive checks, considering all the required measurements, subsequently
 with proper resources and after that
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,that
failure
 just because of elements that are out of your control then
 it is unfair  to say that "desire
 was not strong enough"
With respect to the above points, herewith I would like to  highlight my personal example that shows, after my 200% efforts
, I could not crack my PMP certification in the first
 attempt. I had faced failure
 in my first
 attempt, no matter what my preparation was, firstly
 in the right direction, secondly
 with the correct study approach and lastly
, by using suitable all resources. I missed obtaining a certification on the very first
 go just because of a couple of points and  I faced failure
. In this
 case, it is incorrect to say that my desire
 was not strong enough.
To sum up, bright sides, any failures depend on multiple factors, so it is very wrong to say someone's desire
 was not strong enough, until and unless you have thoroughly investigated that. Thereafter
, I would only say I do not agree to make such
 a statement easily.Submitted by Dakan on 
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