The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts show the difference between France and Australia
on
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in
production
of electricity in 1980 and 2000.
In Australia in 1980, the production of Coal was the highest Add an article
the production
for
50 Change preposition
at
units
while
Oil
was the lowest for
10 Change preposition
at
units
. Hydro Power
and Natural Gas are the same for 20 units
. Coal remained at top production in 2000 for 130 units
whilst Oil
and Natural gas were
2 Change the verb form
was
units
. Hydro Power
was relatively high for 36 units
.
Nuclear Power
in France in 1980 was 15 units
and it significantly reached 126 units
in 2000. The consumption of Oil
and Natural Gas in 1980 were
the same Change the verb form
was
as
25 Change preposition
at
units
but in 2000, data
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the data
of
Coal was the same with Change preposition
on
Oil
for
25 Change preposition
at
units
. Data of Hydro Power
and Natural Power
fell.
The total unit of
Australia in 1980 and 2000 was 100 and 170 Change preposition
in
units
and in France was 90 and 180 units
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