The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts depict the percentage of
water
consumed for different purposes in six areas of the world, such
as North America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
.
The chart is divided into three sectors where water
is used such
as industrial, agricultural and domestic. Futher
more, the majority of usage falls under agricultural purposes for the countries Correct your spelling
Further
such
as South America
with
71%, South East Change preposition
at
Asia
with
81%, Africa Change preposition
at
with
84% and Central Change preposition
at
Asia
with
88%, with exceptions of countries Change preposition
at
such
as North America
with 39% and Europe with 32%.
Domestic use can be categorised as a meagre consumption in all six areas of the world, with the highest usage in South America
, with 19%. Moreover
, the industrial sector has a minuscule consumption of water
in countries such
as South East Asia
, Central Asia
, Africa and South America
, unlike North America
and Europe with 53% consumption of water
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