Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Some people believe that moving from

one

place

to another

place

to live is a good thing because it will help you adventure and help you to see different places and

also

give you different experiences in life.

However

, I do not agree with

this

opinion and think that living in

one

place

is better for two reasons, which I will illustrate in the following essay.

First

of all, you can build strong friendships with your

neighbors

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. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of

this

. My family is living in a city for the

last

30 years.

As a result

, I know lots of people in our area and have a chance to make many good friends and

also

get some elder persons whos really love me and I have the opportunity to learn many things from them.

Consequently

, I feel if you live in a town or city for life-time you can know many people and you can share your sorrows with them and

also

can join in their good moments which can help you to make your life more enjoyable and easy to lead.

Secondly

, you can know your surrounding situation well which will reduce the chances of facing unwanted problems for those you are not prepared

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For instance

one

of my junior school close friend's

father

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has a governmental job. Since his family has to move from

one

area to another area after some years interval. I found him saying about some new and unwanted problems after every shift

such

as in someplace they found there has no renowned educational institute, someplace has water supply

problem

, other has no governmental gas line, someplace has security issue and so on. These types of situations are not wanting for anyone.

On the other hand

, we are not facing new types of problems. But you can not say I live in paradise, my family face

problem

with electricity supply but it is not a new

problem

so we use solar energy to overcome

this

problem

This

type of known

problem

can solve easily and you can prepare yourself for it. In conclusion, living in

one

town or city is better than living

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from

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one

place

to another.

This

is because it will build a strong friendly relation with your

neighbors

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and

also

reduce the chances of facing different unwanted situations.

one

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place

to another

place

to live is a good thing because it will help you adventure and help you to see different places and

also

give you different experiences in life.

However

, I do not agree with

this

opinion and think that living in

one

place

is better for two reasons, which I will illustrate in the following essay.

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