Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The world has become a

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well-connected places thanks to

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education. Due to developing education, many

students

study from universities. Some parents believe that all college teenagers should study whatever they desire while others think that they ought to only can study department that will be

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in their

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like engineering or science. According to

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, I support both views and they should be given equal consideration.

First

of all,

students

should choose what they want if they desire to be pleased in their life.

For instance

, if a student has a talent for art or acting and wants to become an actor or painter in the

future

, choose that profession because every morning when he wakes up he will go to work willingly and be satisfied with the situation he is in and his money will not matter to him.

On the other hand

, studying in a particular field can be very operational for countries with a few demerits.

First

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reason is that the world has been developing and new places discover unknown creatures.

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, the world needs new scientists.

Secondly

, these

students

can invent a lot of equipment and through

this

way make a considerable amount of profit for the country and have exclusiveness of something but these

students

may be obsessive in the

future

and

this

restriction has a negative impact on their minds. In conclusion, from my point of view, pupils must decide what is best for them

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but

also

work to be useful in the

future

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