To improve the quality of education, some people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticise their teachers. Other believe that this will result in loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

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Teachers

are

second

parents and education is a foundation created by

teachers

. Some people believe that to get more attention to improve study is to evaluate the teacher's capacity but I think

this

is not a good idea to criticise educator.

First

of all,

teachers

are our mentors who guide us in every path of life whether it's is educational or ethical so it is not good against supervisors.

Moreover

teachers

always try to do their best to improve and polish all of their pupils

consequently

if in the whole world if someone achieved something it's a great part of teaching so it will be disrespectful if faculty member comes in questions. Apart from

this

teachers

are authorised to teach

students

whatever syllabus set by university colleges or schools

as a result

they are not the ones who will improve quality.

On the other hand

, few people argue that sometimes

students

got involved in some kind of unnecessary activities which lead them out of track so ,in

this

,case lecturer should be careful if

students

are not improving in studies so if

teachers

will have kind of fear that if performance level of any student will go down

then

blame will come on them.

Furthermore

teachers

are mainly responsible for the evaluation of

students

in the study graph if

students

are not involving seriously

then

faculties need to inform guardians. Overall it can be observed that graduates are more responsible for their education so

teachers

should not be criticised and evaluate for anything related to improving the quality of education.

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