The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.
The three pie charts illustrate the method of disposal of risky waste in South
Korea
, Sweden
and the United Kingdom.
It is clear that
the Republic
of Korea
and Sweden
get rid of harmful waste in exactly the same ways on the contrary
with various numbers by recycling, incineration and underground. By the way, the most selected way in the Republic
of Korea
is recycled, whereas
Sweden
is buried underground. The figures are 69 per cent
and 59 per cent
respectively.
On the other hand
, the Republic
of Korea
destroys this
garbage underground by 22 per cent
. In addition
, only 9 per cent
of incineration use
in the Add a missing verb
is use
Republic
of Korea
conversely
20 per cent
in Sweden
with 5 per cent
less than recycling.
However
, there is 8 per cent
of both chemical treatment and dumping at sea apply only in the United Kingdom. On top of that underground hazardous rubbish is the most popular in this
country. Nevertheless
, it is hardly found incineration here with about 2 per cent
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