All parents want the best орportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and givе your opinion.

Some parents think that

school

is necessary and it gives to

pupils

knowledge about math, geometry and history while

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think that

school

should teach

pupils

some profession

such

as architecture, builder, driver and so on. Personally, I think that learning is

most

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important thing in our life. In

this

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i

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I

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will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

Firstly

,

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should say that knowledge adorns a person and he will be more confident if he will understand all. What

i

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mean by

this

is that

pupils

should get information at

school

and enter the university.

For example

, if we compare excellent

pupil

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pupils

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and bad we can understand that they

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have

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different worldwide and

persentage

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percentage

of productivity in

work

from British resources.

This

fact claim to study.

On the other hand

, we can understand that skills

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important for

pupils

for one reason thinking.

In other

words

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it means that they can start to think as

elderly

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an elderly

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person

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people

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and

work

with them as well as they can.

For instance

, I have a friend his name is Michael and he

want

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to

work

without study at

school

because he

begun

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has begun

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to

work

at

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in

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the summer

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and start to love earning money. In conclusion,

i

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strongly recommend

to

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apply

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studying and learning

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the subject

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subject

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subjects

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as well as you can .