Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that a small

amount

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of people are providing

work

for the same company their entire life.

However

, it is difficult to determine whether working for the same

place

is more

advantagous

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advantageous

or being

employeed

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employed

in several organisations is more significant. It seems to me that changing the

work

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workplace

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place

is more beneficial

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because it will lead to

development

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the development

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of additional knowledge. Both sides of

this

argument will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.

First

of all, some employees are delighted to have a job in the same

place

and do not want to move to another company. The reason for

this

is that there is job satisfaction and they are more comfortable at their occupation.

For example

, the relationship with their

colleages

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colleagues

and boss will be excellent and that makes

their

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more comfortable and have those people

arount

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around

them. So,

that is

why a lot of humans do not want to change to another

place

.

On the other hand

, there is a group

that is

considered that it is much more

considerable

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to provide

work

in several places. The reason for

this

is that there are open to gain up some more experience in their employment.

For instance

, numerous

work places

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workplaces

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are providing their duties in

different

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a different

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way, which will make u able to learn several technics.

Furthermore

,

this

will

also

make u experience different situations, that can be useful in the future. So,

this

got a lot of benefits to

grow

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in your career. To conclude, I strongly believe that working for different organisations is more beneficial

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because it will show u new technics that that will be

advanteous

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advantageous

for later and

also

in

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it

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will make u come across new situations.