Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

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too soon can give us more advantages than the drawback in term of the payment problem. In my opinion, it would definitely make the
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worse if we can easily
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to
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card
. There are several benefits of
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financial.
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, we do not have to carry around the cash and you can buy anything at the moment without concerning amount
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, which is very
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because we can just only keep the
card
in the pocket.
Secondly
, the
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bonus point to redeem the goods in every purchase.
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expensive items without buying
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directly.
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additional discounts were offered when you use
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card
. So that, we can get
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cheaper price while using it.
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over convenience
are in form of
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consequences
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.
Firstly
,
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credit card
can let you gain the extra expense by buying without planning, which
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issue can lead to the
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consequence, the huge amounts of
interest
. The
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rate of the
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serious when you can not pay the
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on time.
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, the debt can be contributed by a
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of good’s
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and become unable to pay in the future. In conclusion, I can understand why some people might still prefer to use
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the
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advantages
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