There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter: describe what the problem with the changing rooms is say what happened the last times you complained explain what you want the manager to do.

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Dear Mr Adams, My name is

Shoira

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Shira

and I am a member of the swimming pool located in Sharks street. I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction with the toilet and shower conditions in your swimming pool. I am a

permament

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permanent

member of the Dinamo swimming pool, I like its location and

facilities

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the facilities

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offered.

However

everytime

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when I have to use the toilet in the changing room I feel disgusting. More specifically, the toilets are very dirty, some of them are broken

thus

, it is impossible to flash water. I have already complained about

this

situation before. Despite the promise that the issues would be eliminated, no actions have been taken

untill

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until

now. I would concede that keeping toilets clean may require additional efforts,

however

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you should understand its importance in

maintaing

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maintaining

the clientage. I would like to suggest replacing old and broken toilets

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with

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new ones and putting a shift to clean them every hour. I look

foward

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forward

to your

apropriate

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appropriate

actions. Yours Sincerely,

Shoira

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Shira

Submitted by shoira.shakirovna on Mon Oct 11 2021

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