You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter in connection with my recent stay at Park View Hotel
room
no.205, India. Unfortunately,
air
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conditioner was not working in the
room
. I spent the most miserable 3 days stay in your hotel. Since it is summer the temperature is around 45 degrees out so, it is boiling hot in the
room
. I can able to switch on AC but there was no cooling and it is very hard for me to manage with a single fan.
Moreover
, It is a closed
room
without any open windows or balcony I got suffocation. As I am suffering from
this
problem, I have called the reception and asked them to either repair the AC or change my
room
to proper condition
room
. They
guarnteed
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guaranteed
me that they will fix the issue as soon as possible.
However
, none of them helped me. I want you to verify the
room
condition before allocating
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the customer.
In addition
to
this
, I would like you to give me a discount for future bookings or refund 30
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of the price that I paid. Yours faithfully, Rachel Green
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