You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Mark, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about a

party

at my home

this

weekend. I am Hari Sunkara and I am a full-time employee at ABC company since 2015 as Senior Manager. I have two school-going children. I have recently moved into

this

house two days ago and currently arranging all the household things. We are going to plan a get-together

party

at my home

this

coming Saturday evening at 7 pm on the account of my recent promotion. As I am expecting some noise during the

party

that may cause inconvenience to you and I really apologize for that. In fact, we would like to invite you and your family to join us in the evening and celebrate with us to get to know each other being

neighbors

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and it is really our pleasure having you

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the

party

. Hoping that you understand us and allowing us to celebrate the occasion

this

weekend. Yours Sincerely, Hari Sunakra

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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