You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain about my
credit
card
statement for February. I am a loyal customer of your esteemed bank MDFC, having an account in the downtown branch,Toronto. I am holding a VISA gold
card
which was issued
last
year when I opened my account.I frequently use my
credit
card
to buy items online as well as in person.
Last
Thursday, I have received my monthly
credit
statement and surprisingly when I checked all my
transactions
, I found 2
transactions
which
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were made on the dates 3rd and 4th of February. As I remember and best of my memory, I did not buy them
andthey
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and they
are very expensive too.
However
, on the same
dates
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there were 2 other
transactions
listed in the summary of purchases and those are clear and no discrepancy. As soon as I found them, I have blocked my
credit
card
and now I would like to ask you for
further
investigation of those payments.
Also
, I wanted the statement to be reviewed and regenerated again without these two
transactions
and until
then
, I will not pay my
credit
card
bill and hope you
also
agree with that. Yours Faithfully, Hari Sunkara
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