You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to complain about my

credit

card

statement for February. I am a loyal customer of your esteemed bank MDFC, having an account in the downtown branch,Toronto. I am holding a VISA gold

card

which was issued

last

year when I opened my account.I frequently use my

credit

card

to buy items online as well as in person.

Last

Thursday, I have received my monthly

credit

statement and surprisingly when I checked all my

transactions

, I found 2

transactions

which

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that

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were made on the dates 3rd and 4th of February. As I remember and best of my memory, I did not buy them

andthey

Correct your spelling

and they

are very expensive too.

However

, on the same

dates

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,dates

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there were 2 other

transactions

listed in the summary of purchases and those are clear and no discrepancy. As soon as I found them, I have blocked my

credit

card

and now I would like to ask you for

further

investigation of those payments.

Also

, I wanted the statement to be reviewed and regenerated again without these two

transactions

and until

then

, I will not pay my

credit

card

bill and hope you

also

agree with that. Yours Faithfully, Hari Sunkara

Submitted by kishore.likith on Mon Oct 11 2021

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