Some people think that when many imported tv programs or films are shown in country. it can improve the country’s culture.others feeling is better for a country to make and broadcast its own local movie.Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

We are living in the digital age,where most of the population use to watch any
TV
programmes or films.Some
people
thinknthat
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think that
tv
programs
or films should be produced locally and broadcast
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.While others believe that it should be imported as it helps
people
to understand the different cultures.I believe
taht
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that
both the
programs
produced locally and internationally should be broadcasted because both have
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own perks.
Firstly
,the
tv
shows or movies imported from outside of
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the
country
it
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helps
people
to get
overall
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an overall
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idea of that
country
's culture and many more things. It is one of the best methods to learn foreign
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language
languages
.
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people
can learn
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antiquates
attitudes
,
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manners
and idea of that nation.Imported
TV
shows enhance the mental horizon of the viewer . That gives
different
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perspective to the matter.
For example
, after watching the
movioe
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movie
movies
like Harry Potter a
lot
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children inspire to study hard and work hard. On the
othe
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other
hand, the
tv
series or movies made locally enhance the understanding of their own local culture. In
this
mordern
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modern
era, there are some
people
who are not aware of their own
country
's glorious past or tradition.
Furthermore
, the movies like 'Kesari' encourage the feeling of patriotism. The major
benifit
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benefit
benefits
is That population can get employment through it because it needs a large team to produce any movie. I believe that all the
programs
produced locally or internationally should be broadcasted because
programs
produced outside of the
country
helps to get the knowledge of
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the globe
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.
However
,there
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some downside
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it.
First
of all, some audience blindly
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the culture which is not good . While on the
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other
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othe r
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other
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side, if it's produced locally it can improve the economy of the
country
as
money
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the money
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remains locally. All in all, it can be concluded that there should not be any restriction for broadcasting it . But
aundience
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audience
audiences
should wisely decide it which films or
tv
shows
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good for them,
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