Some people think that many imported films or tv programs are shown in the country,it can improve the country’s culture.other feel that it is for a country to make it locally and broadcast it.Discuss both the views and give ur opinion.

We are living in the digital age,where most of the population use to watch any
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locally while others believe that
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should be imported as it helps people to understand different cultures. I believe that both the programs produced
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own perks.
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