Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that investing an enormous amount in old

buildings

is very costly and it is better if those

buildings

dismantled and construct skyscrapers. In my opinion, preserving old heritage is beneficial for

country

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the country

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economy and growth because it brings a lot of tourism and employment.

To begin

with, ancient

buildings

shows country history and culture which is really important for youth as it helps them to connect with their own roots

in addition

, individuals can learn various things from history which is useful in their life. For illustrates, in India Taj Mahal,

symbol

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a symbol

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of love and ethnicity there are number of

buildings

which have unique story and importance

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Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.

It has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping in the community. What are the benefits and drawbacks of such a requirement to the community and the young adults?

The best way to protect the environment is to use local resource, such as food or building materials rather than transporting resources from other places. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has become very common for people to borrow money. Most people have a credit card, a mortgage and often they will buy car on credit as well. Is this a good idea or is it too risky? Discuss both views and give your own opinion