Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much; we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that investing an enormous amount in old
buildings
is very costly and it is better if those
buildings
dismantled and construct skyscrapers. In my opinion, preserving old heritage is beneficial for
country
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the country
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economy and growth because it brings a lot of tourism and employment.
To begin
with, ancient
buildings
shows country history and culture which is really important for youth as it helps them to connect with their own roots
in addition
, individuals can learn various things from history which is useful in their life. For illustrates, in India Taj Mahal,
symbol
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a symbol
the symbol
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of love and ethnicity there are number of
buildings
which have unique story and importance
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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