Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem and how could the situation be improved?

In today's world, many
people
waste their
time
due to the and
traffic
times. In
this
,
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I want
discuss
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about
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cause and
ways
that can help
people
to have a better journey. One and important issue about
that is
a significant increase in the
ways
traffic
. Many
people
tend to
use
their private
cars
, which play a crucial role in the amount of
traffic
. Most of them ,more specific in rush-hour,
use
their private
cars
for going to their job or shopping. As result, a huge amount of
cars
are driven in the
ways
and developed the
traffic
, which brings long
time
journey. Another reason is the poor
use
of public transports. Government improve railways and
busses
to decrease the amount of the
traffic
of the cities. They destroyed
cars
ways
for
this
phenomenon and build
busses
and trains
ways
. So if anyone doesn't
use
these facilities, there will be more
cars
and
busses
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highways. One of the practical
ways
for
that is
public transports improvement. Trains and
busses
can transfer many citizens
at
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less
time
. Even many of them are without delay and more comfortable. It is obvious, the government can invest
to
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these methods of transfer and benefit from both financial aspects and road
traffic
improvement. Another
way
is to encourage
people
to
use
bicycle and electric motorcycles. These circles
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advantages for both our city and our-selfs. If the government provides some special
ways
for them and give them some financial benefit
such
as free-tax many
people
tend to
use
them compared with their
cars
. Many environmental benefits come with that. Another beneficial
way
is online services. Nowadays, many services are done online and without any physical existence and it is a great
way
to saving our costs and
time
. Some Tv programmes and celebrities encouragements can lead
people
to buy online and reduce the
traffic
by
this
way
. In the conclusion,
,
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personally
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believe that
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people
must keep their
cars
for trips and travels and improve their city and themselves health by the alternative
ways
.
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