You received electricity bills but it is too high because of wrong meter reading. Write to the concern person and explain the problem.

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Dear sir, I am living in a block forest street house number 234. I have a problem

about

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my electricity bill. I received

lost

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the lost

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month

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of my

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house electric power statement

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apply

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yesterday while I

shocked

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when I was seeing

power

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due

amount

because it is too high

amount

compare

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to our regular bill

amount

This

means double the

amount

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written in our account but it is not possible because we are working persons so almost spend a lot of time in our office and

last

month we have not used much more because previous month our family had been living outside where vocation place. I think my energy meter has been

showed

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wrong reading

instead

of right

therefore

our hydro

invoice

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were high. If you would rectify the mistake I could

be relax

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Hence

, as soon as possible you would clear all the troubles about

this

and you could give accurate power

amount

due in order

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I can take a relax

brethe

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breathe

. I am

eagarly

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eagerly

waiting for your positive response. thank you. your's faithfully,

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For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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You received electricity bills but it is too high because of wrong meter reading. Write to the concern person and explain the problem.

The Greeting

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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