You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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My dearest Philip, I am sorry I am writing only now.

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, I would like to thank you for all the attention and support you gave me while I was in Sydney. Things like that are priceless and I feel blessed to have you as my friend. I expect you and Ingrid to come to Rio soon

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so that I try to somehow

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joyful moments as those you

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to me. I am

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writing because of the fact that I forgot a very important document in the room where I stayed at your house. The document is a signed contract and was the most important reason for my trip to Australia, after the business seminar I attended. You

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can imagine how desperate I have been in the

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looking for

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document in my luggage. I could not find it anywhere and now I am sure I left it in your house. Please let me know if you find it, and post it with express delivery as soon as possible. I will pay for the expense; just let me know your bank, account and branch numbers. With best wishes, Leonardo

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Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

The Greeting

children can learn effectively bu watching television. therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school.

Many beleive that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in countryside? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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