More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

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people

's lifestyle

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changed. Nowadays,

people

are willing to have a proper eating plan and regular exercise.

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essay will discuss the purpose of

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approach and will give options to encourage others to follow the same. There are a lot of reasons which can be taken into consideration.

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, most actors/actresses, singers, and celebrities like to have healthy food and exercises to keep their body in shape and they publish

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social media to encourage

people

who are interested.

Secondly

, individuals realize the benefit of taking proper nutrition foods and exercises to avoid bad

health

issues.

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, suffer from long term diseases like diabetes, heart disease, low/high blood pressure and mental

health

issues like stress, sleeping disorders. After starting diet and exercises they can feel better and prevent those. The education and public guiding system can motivate

people

to have

better

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lifestyle with minimizing their

health

problems. Schools and

education

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institutes should encourage and teach students to do more physical activities and limit fat intake. Meanwhile, governments and private institutes could raise awareness programs about

consequences

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of taking fatty and salty food.

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motivate

people

about doing exercise that they learned from sports and show the positive effects on

health

and well-being

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instance, they can launch some campaign and media advertising about balanced diet and daily workout. In conclusion, eating healthy foods and exercising

are

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an essential part of life in present days and it can avoid many things

such

as medical bill expenses

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