You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: -explain why you are interested in helping -Give details suitable past experience -suggest ways you might help with the event.

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Dear sir, I am writing in connection to an advertisement published in the

last

week's newspapers 'The Daily News', I am willing to apply for

this

voluntary work to assist in a charity event. I am exceedingly excited to apply

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this

non-profitable charity to provide " three times meals" to the unemployed and below poverty line groups during

this

pandemic situation. I am keenly interested to serve those who are needy because I believe helping hands are better than praying lips. If I am capable to put

efforts

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into giving input through participating in

such

a noble cause

then

it will engender a sense of happiness within myself making me feel blessed.

Thus

, I want to invest my spare time in

this

voluntary activity.

Last

year I had already worked as a volunteer by saving hundreds of lives, of those who were trapped in floodwaters in Kerala. For evidence of my dedication towards

this

community services for free, I had received an appreciation certificate for bravery which I am hereby attaching along with

this

application. As

this

event needs proper details of the affected poor population, I would like to suggest you carry out a survey categorized on various earning sources which are impacted during covid-19.

Also

, I can provide an application to smooth the survey process which I had already developed being a software engineer so it will be useful If I will be given a chance to join

this

charity. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours sincerely, Jhalak.

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