You recently did a short cookery courses a cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course write a letter to the coolest director at the cookery school in your letter describe what you enjoy about the course say how much cooking you have done since the course suggest another cookery course you do likes school to offer

dear Sir or Madam , I'm writing
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letter to address how much I have enjoyed your cookery course the most incredible thing about your session was that it was very nice of you
forgiving
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us a chance to present the signature dish from our countries. I was deeply touched and
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recommended your school to my friend because of it. after finishing the courses, I have tried on the techniques that chef Nicole taught us, and I have been working on my cooking skill three times every day. I even tried some new dishes since I have been followed
schools
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official account on Instagram attachment are the pictures of the dishes that I have made. hope they
looks
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inviting to you. I can't help to notice that
healthy
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a healthy
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diet has become a trend recently. there are so many people
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who are
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now talking about it even fast-food restaurants are launched
low calorie
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meals. maybe the school could start a course in
this
field. it’s going to be a big hit and I'm sure I will be joining the class. thank you for asking me for the feedback again. please keep me posted if there is anything new coming up. yours sincerely Sue
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  • moreover
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