Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely result in society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although

permitting kids to make their own choices on food, clothes and entertainment make them efficient to take a wise decision on their life, often it makes them selfish. I

also

agree with those people who think child to make personal

opinions

about things that have negative impacts on them. Generally, in

this

modern world, many

parents

believe that happiness means getting

freedom

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the freedom

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to develop

own

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their own

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perspective on everyday matters, especially, dies, clothes and anything which provides entertain.

Thus

, people allow their kids to share their like or dislike about daily necessities.

Similarly

, they think the

children

whose

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who

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have

right

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the right

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to make their personal

opinions

would be more

intellectual

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intelligent

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to make wise

thinks

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think

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on

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about

in

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their future life.

For instance

, Wellspring whose

parents

permit them

choosing

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to choose

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their

favorite

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favourite

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items, those

are feel

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feel

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confident and may develop their

decision making

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decision-making

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ability.

A part

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Apart

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from

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of

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these positive effects on

children

making

own

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their own

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perspective on selecting everyday goods, it has some adverse effects on

child’s

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a child’s

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behavior

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behaviour

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and social activities. Freedom for making choices, sometimes cause

of

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by

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selfishness

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the selfishness

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of

children

.

For example

, young could not think about others

opinions

,

therefore

, they always try to force

other

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others

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to establish their personal thinking lead to

misbehave

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misbehaving

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with other individuals in

the

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apply

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society. For these reasons, some

parents

do not allow their wellsprings to make their own choices. So, I think

parents

should be aware

on

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of

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their child’s personal

opinions

. In conclusion, allowing

children

to build their own wishes is important to make wise decisions in their

further

life, but may

also

make them

self-center

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self-centre

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, could not feel others feelings.