You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain what sort of job you would like • and say what experience and skills you have

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter in reference to a job board which was posted by your employment firm on your website. I am Dave, and I am 22 years old. I have completed my Administration Office Executive course

form

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Mohawk University. A bio-tech company

also

employed me as a part-time manager’s assistant but now, I am looking for full-time work. I know how to operate all the computer Softwares related to

this

field, and I pose 2 years of work experience as well. I have a number of skills

such

as effective communication, arranging professional meetings, creating the spreadsheet and making employee’s payroll etc. On the job

board

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you mentioned that you have a position available for an administrative assistant, and I am immensely interested in that post. I am requesting you to consider me for

this

role, as I met all the requirements which are stated in the advertisement. I have attached my resume with

this

letter as well as previous work experience references. If you wish to arrange an interview

then

I am available on 22 and 23 November from 8:00 a.m. to 9:00 a.m. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dilpreet.

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