Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product. Discuss if you agree or disagree.

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There have been a lot of businesses started over the past two decades, and the advancements in science and technology have

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product. I completely agree to that statement that, new features or products can make the business successful. Usage of repetitive ideas and brainstorming ideas are the two cases that I will use to assert my opinion.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product. Discuss if you agree or disagree.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Modern technology is creating a single world culture and if is good for mankind. do you agree or disagree with statement.

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years.

Some people think that no homework should be given to children.other however say that extra work is needed after school for children and teenagers in order to succeed. Discuss both view and give your opinion.