to what extent has the internet made life morw convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The
internet
is an important part of life in modern times. It has changed our lives in many ways and made it easier to do many things. In my opinion, I agree with
this
. I will
first
look at some ideas why and
then
some benefits.
Internet
has made shopping much easier. Before we had to go to supermarket or shopping centre to buy things. Now we can use the
internet
. If I want something I can order online and it will come to me and it doesn'
t
matter whether the shop is in the same place or not. It is an advantage like travelling.
Internet
means we can find tickets to places easily. We can book our own plane and even choose the place we sit. We don'
t
have to do check in at the airport. It is easy to find the information because we can look it up on the
internet
. In the past people had to go to a library or information centre and it wasn'
t
so easy and quick to find what they wanted.
Also
we can communicate quickly with
internet
. We can use email
instead
of letters and we can use Skype or other communication methods
instead
of phoning which can be expensive or difficult.We can find everything more easily:
for example
if we want to find a house to rent or hire a car. Without the
internet
life is more inconvenient. Normal activities take much longer to do and we can'
t
find what we need as easily. I agree that the
internet
made life more convenient.
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