In today's fast developing world, drug abuse is not only one of the burning issue but also an alarming one. Unfortunately, many teenagers and children are falling prey to it. Few social scientists believe that it is the bad influence that children acquire either from their parents or from the sociecty they live in as a reason for drug addiction. This essay details causes and effects on the usage of drugs by young people.

To begin
with, it is an undeniable fact that
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child
habits
are often affected either in a good or bad way depending upon the parent's
habits
. According to a survey conducted by AIMS medical society in order to study
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sychology of
children
, the results revealed that
children
acquire
habits
from their surrounding people. So,
parents
and society definitely have a strong influence on a
child
's mindset. If the peers with whom
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hild lives with has a habit for smoking, consuming excessive alcohol or some banned substances like
drugs
etc.
Children
tend to get attracted to it and even they start consuming it.
Thus
, peers will be setting a bad example to young people. There could be
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evastating effect
to
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a
child
's future because of these kinds of problems.
Child
's future could be destroyed by getting addicted to
drugs
.
For example
, recently few students from Karnataka were prisoned for consuming and forcing others to consume
drugs
.
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their future and if the habit of consuming
drugs
is not stopped by them, it can even lead to death. To fight
drugs
parents
and the government are responsible. Most of the accountability lies on the shoulders of
parents
to protect and guide
children
from the bad influence that he or she may be affected by.
Parents
can set an example of their lives to young people, provided they follow good
habits
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overnment
also
plays a role in
this
by making stricter laws and punishing the bad influencers. To conclude, drug addiction is a growing issue all over the world and it should be taken seriously. Society as well as
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overnment should combine to counter
this
problem effectively.
Thus
, young generations can be protected from
this
menace.
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