My name is Alex and I am a software developer in the Ericsson privated limited. I am writing this letter to seek your attention towards the decision of the firm to shutdown the cafeteria.

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My name is Alex and I am a software developer in the Ericsson

privated

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private

limited. I am writing

this

letter to seek your attention towards the decision of the firm to

shutdown

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the

cafeteria

First

of all, I would like to inform you about the reasons

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low

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usage of

cafeteria

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by the employees. Most of the workers do not try

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this

cafe because of its

low quality

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food and

baverages

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beverages

. Apart from

this

, there are very few options on the menu which often encourages the employees to not visit

this

cafeteria

. Due to above said reasons, employees prefer to go nearby restaurants and eating points which waste their plenty of time during the breaks. Not only

this

, due to unavailability of tea and coffee, sometimes, makes the staff less active.

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can adversely affect the production of the company. I would like to share some

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in order to improve

this

cafeteria

Company

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should inspect regularly the quality of raw materials used in the

cafeteria

so that it can be improved.

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the

cafeteria

ought to be given through proper advertisement of tender with specified menu items.

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can increase the competition and ,

thus

, can eventually raise the standard of the contractor. I shall be thankful to you if these issues will be raised in

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meeting. Yours sincerely Alex Mathew

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My name is Alex and I am a software developer in the Ericsson privated limited. I am writing this letter to seek your attention towards the decision of the firm to shutdown the cafeteria.

The Greeting

Some people think most crimes are the result of circumstances like poverty and other social problems. Others believe that they are caused by people who are bad in nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The planet's population is reaching unsustainable levels, and people are facing shortage of resources like water, food and fuel. To what consequences may overpopulation lead? In your opinion, what measures can be taken to fight overpopulation?

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.