You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: • Explain why you changed jobs • Describe your new job • Tell him/her your other news

Dear John, I was so glad to get a letter from you. I have not heard from you for a thousand years! How are you doing? Cannot forget how we hanged up on Cuba
last
year but it was my worst hangover ever. I have the news for you. As you might remember I hated my
last
job with all my guts, so I
finally
changed it and find a job of my dream. I am working now in NeverSummer Snowboards as a sales manager and we are selling snowboards and apparel worldwide. So if you need a new board do not hesitate to ask me. And I totally forget to tell you the main news! I am planning a marriage with Christina , so we are waiting for you at our wedding party on August the 1st, I will send you an invitation in the
next
letter. I hope that
this
letter will find you in a good health. Cannot wait for your answer! Best wishes, Valentin Bakin
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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